MH-Undiscovered

[gopostal]

Mapping and criticism go hand-in-hand. Elemental was being very positive and Hellfy will learn a lot from it. You want to see harsh criticism, check out mapraider. Those guys are rough, but more often than not correct.

[Blood Asp]

I Wouldnt bother going to MapRaider, Just ask XYZ8000 to take a look at ur map hahaha

[-HellFire-]

I agree that criticism is good but I don't want to make more versions of the map.
My idea is to practice a lot with these arches and lighting etc. and then try to make another map.
So the next map you'll see from me will take some time but it will have better lighting and other things I learned from Alucard and EA.

[*POTS*]

I Am not saying the map is bad i am just saying it could be less cubic is all the map is good just the build quality could be better, Also remember its his 3rd?? i think map.. He needs the criticisms to assist him in his further maps, if u just say Yep is good but dont show other sides of it then u will never get better

I told him he could use less teleporters and more movers (doors) to connect the rooms and the corridors but I think he needs someone who can help him making movers.
Maybe K? I know she can make movers.

[-HellFire-]

EA already learned me doors and if you can make doors (also movers) you can also make lifts and stuff.
So next map I'm working on with EA has lots of doors and non-cubic stuff

[Hermskii]

Looks like this one got finished but the final result never got posted. Send it to me please. Thanks!