My oppinion..
WTF
THIS SUCKS...
Hahaha nah thats a total lie really lol
Looks rather nice for a hellfire design

But ur still not being as, hmm, lets say explorative in your building :p
Alot of places on the screens i am looking at thinking, why not shove some trim here and there :p
When ur building a map just trim up everything, and delete things that are excessive.
*the wooden bridge thing in the outdoor area could definately do with some kind of trim.*
Also again with the bridge i dont know since i cant see the map itself atm, but there could be some holes and snapped pieces of wood, ur choice though.
But the map does definately look like a large improvement from other maps i have seen from you
Well done, i'd give ya a sticker but someone stole them!! >:(
EA